Can You Ever Have Too Much Voice?
Writing, Craft, Character Jana Van der Veer Writing, Craft, Character Jana Van der Veer

Can You Ever Have Too Much Voice?

Last week I talked about the novel Sunshine, by Robin McKinley. I liked the story, but found the rambling, digressing, and occasionally convoluted nature of the writing distracting to the point where I occasionally skipped passages – which I almost never do. Why? Aren’t we told, over and over again, that we must have “voice” in our writing? What is “voice” anyway, and can you have too much of it?

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April Book Roundup
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April Book Roundup

I had a very nonfiction-heavy month overall; I am in the middle of another fiction book that I may finish by the end of the week but the two novels I’ve been reading are long – 477 and 502 pages, respectively – so I’ll cut myself a little slack. It’s not about seeing how many books I can cram into a month anyway

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Give It a Whirl: Writing Exercises for National Poetry Month
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Give It a Whirl: Writing Exercises for National Poetry Month

Last week we talked about poetry techniques for fiction or nonfiction. How about writing some actual poetry? For some prose writers, that’s a hell, no! I get it. It’s a totally different form. But you can write in any form of poetry you like! Prose poetry is a thing. So is free verse. If you want to, you can look at all kinds of forms of poetry and their rules for a special challenge.

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What Fiction Writers Can Learn from Poetry
Writing, Poetry, Craft Jana Van der Veer Writing, Poetry, Craft Jana Van der Veer

What Fiction Writers Can Learn from Poetry

It’s National Poetry Month! I often feel like poetry is seen as “literary” and cut off from the popular imagination. Robert Pinsky’s The Favorite Poem Project and NPR’s recent invitation to submit poems via Twitter and TikTok help bring poetry back to the everyday. Fiction and nonfiction get far more attention from the media and the public, of course, and often people, even writers, fall firmly in the prose or poetry camps.

However, there is a lot prose writers can learn from poetry. Especially if you’re feeling like your writing is a little stale, you can learn to play with words again by paying attention to some of the techniques poets use.

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March Book Roundup
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March Book Roundup

Highlights for me this month were Craft in the Real World (nonfiction) and The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue (fiction). I had a pretty eclectic mix of nonfiction, but a very fantasy-based fiction mix this month, for no particular reason. I choose based on what’s interesting, but also whatever pops up as ready in my library holds list. I have so many holds, in fact, that I constantly have to recycle them so I can finish the ones I already have!

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How to Write a Kick-Ass Query Letter
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How to Write a Kick-Ass Query Letter

Querying a book is both a lot simpler and a lot harder than it may appear. Simple, because there are very specific things you need to include, and there is a very simple outline you can follow to make sure those elements are present. Hard, because holy cow – creating a compelling short synopsis of your book in one or two paragraphs is a major challenge!

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#PitMad? No Problem! The Ultimate Guide to Creating the Perfect Pitch
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#PitMad? No Problem! The Ultimate Guide to Creating the Perfect Pitch

Now that most agents have re-opened to queries, and #PitMad is in full swing, it’s time to talk about the right way to prepare your pitch to sell your book. In this March series, I’ll be focused on selling your novel or memoir, because selling other kinds of nonfiction requires a different process. However, in terms of selling your book, memoir works more like fiction, so we can treat them together. 

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February Book Roundup
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February Book Roundup

I read 6 books this month, surprising even me (and I’m in the middle of 2 more, but won’t finish them until March). I am getting quite a bit more reading done by adding a 10-20 minute reading time in the morning. Not that number of books is the goal, but it does mean that if I don’t get time to read later, at least I’ve done a little bit for the day.

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Why Should I Care? How to Build a Character Readers Root For
Writing, Craft, Character Jana Van der Veer Writing, Craft, Character Jana Van der Veer

Why Should I Care? How to Build a Character Readers Root For

In my last blog post, I talked about doing writing (and other) Challenges and how they can be good for us, sparking motivation to achieve our goals. (I am, by the way, still going strong on my Challenges I described – yaay me!). In order to succeed at a daunting Challenge we have to have a powerful desire behind it. If the goal is to write for 100 days straight, or train for a marathon, there must be a why behind it. And the why has to be compelling enough for us to keep going, even when we’d rather sleep in, or binge-watch a series on Netflix.

But what about our fictional characters?

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Feeling Stuck or Bored? Take On a New Challenge
Writing, Motivation Jana Van der Veer Writing, Motivation Jana Van der Veer

Feeling Stuck or Bored? Take On a New Challenge

It’s snowy/sleety/icy here today. I spent an hour and a half shoveling slush from my walks and driveway (bonus: I got a killer workout). The groundhog has officially declared six more weeks of winter. (I live in New England, where we realistically have more like 8-10 more weeks of winter. Not that I’m counting.) We’re in that long dreary pre-spring time where nothing much seems to be happening, which is especially true in this ongoing pandemic.

Thus, it is the perfect time to start a new Challenge.

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January Book Roundup
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January Book Roundup

After doing my “Best of 2020” book lists, I realized it might be interesting to write more often about what I’m reading as I go, rather than doing one big list. My goal this year is to read 52 books, which means one per week. So far I’m on track. This way, too, you won’t get just “the best of” but my thoughts on whatever books I happen to read. Often I’m reading as a writer, particularly in fiction, so hopefully that will be useful to you as well.

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Imposter Syndrome Is an Imposter
Writing, Motivation Jana Van der Veer Writing, Motivation Jana Van der Veer

Imposter Syndrome Is an Imposter

Are you a Writer? 

What’s your immediate answer, when I ask that question? Is it a resounding “YES!”? Or a quieter, “Well, maybe… sort of…” or even “Not yet, because…”

If, like me, you’ve set your writing goals for the year, it’s important to start the year off with the right mindset, and foremost is thinking about our identities as writers.

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On Planning, Scheduling, and Not Giving Up
Writing, Productivity Jana Van der Veer Writing, Productivity Jana Van der Veer

On Planning, Scheduling, and Not Giving Up

Welcome to 2021! Has everyone set their writing goals for the year? Do you know what you want to do, your target date, and do you have a plan and a schedule to make it happen? I know, I know, it goes against all ideas of “creativity” to plan and schedule your writing. If you wanted that, you’d go work in a factory. But today I’m going to show you a very good reason to do so. 

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How to Smash Your 2021 Writing Goals - Starting Now
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How to Smash Your 2021 Writing Goals - Starting Now

To end this year, I’m going to write a couple of posts on goals for 2021. I know a lot of people, myself included, hate the dreaded “new year resolutions,” having too often experienced a few days or weeks of early optimism soon torpedoed by boredom or difficulty. This is different, I promise! Setting goals is actually a good thing to do, if you do it right. 

But still, isn’t it fine to wait until January to plan for 2021? 

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